|Artamiel (07/12/2017 09:28am):|
War never end here, as years rolls
Some cities destroyed, while some arose
They built brand new sea and air routes
When Spann Island free from troops?
>_< Sorry for my poor English...
Last Edited on 07/12/2017 09:29am
|Xmo5 (07/12/2017 10:59am):|
You could say its ExSpannded Island.
|Jackie Milton (07/13/2017 07:31am):|
Oooh. I always like some good slant rhymes (kudos to my homegurl Emily Dickenson). I think it's a
testament to the fact that because Spann Island has been so ravaged, it can never truly be whole again.
|Xmo5 (07/14/2017 08:29am):|
Haha thanks for reminding me about this one:
Always makes me smile, partly because it's so goofy and partly because I struggled so hard
to find good rhymes, but yet it still turned out great (IMO) as a result of sheer dumb
luck. Kinda makes me think of this:
|Jackie Milton (07/14/2017 01:01pm):|
I don't know, I just really like the slanted heroic couplet. I have them in "Picnic" and "Subs..." atleast
|Xmo5 (07/18/2017 11:30am):|
I remember specifically liking the abyss/surface rhyme.
|Jackie Milton (08/19/2017 03:19pm):|
Lol, I don't remember if I watched that video. Where did your hair go? You looked like the (1/n)*sigma
(i=1 to n) xsub1 metalhead.
|Xmo5 (10/24/2017 07:12pm):|
I cut it for the first time in 8 years around the time I graduated college to make myself more employable. ...
... I mean, who says that was me??